Illezabeth (illezabeth) wrote in fma_ai,
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 Hey I'm new here and I have an EdxEnvy story that I'd like to get people's opinions on. This is the first time I've written Envy so I was wondering if you could tell me if he's in character or not and whether the story needs more work or not.

Title: Just the Girl
Pairing/Characters: Envy / Edward
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Rating: 12
Genre: Romance/Humour
Disclaimer: I do not own fullmetal alchemist or any of it's characters... my life sucks...
Summary: They know they don't have the most conventional relationship... EdxEnvy

The story's on fanfiction.net but feel free to leave an anonymous review there or leave one to this post but I would just like to know what people think.
Thank you
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